Love is the Problem

This author reached out to me about her story and reading the blurb, I thought it would be good to check out. I was left confused and disappointed. I think there is so much potential with the story and where the author wants to take it. The plot was left open and I was left scratching my head going ‘huh’.
It was described as a HEA but in reality it ends with a cliffy to me. You don’t know if she will end up happy. I had trouble following along, distinguishing between what was going on, and no real resolution to the plot.
I did find out that this is just the beginning of the story for Jimmie and there will be more to come. I think with designation of quotes when the characters are speaking would clarify the story as well as maybe italicizing the dream sequences or making them more discernible.

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This author is new to me. The blurb of the story had me intrigued and I wanted to know more. I was left disappointed as I dove in. It is a very quick read and I finished it in no time. After reaching out to the author I found out this is just the beginning of their story and Jimmie’s shot at love. It does end in an abrupt cliffy just as a warning.
I was a little lost in it and confused with telling when Jimmie was talking with others, thinking, or dreaming. That last sex scene was HOT and I thought it was real only to realize it was a dream.
Overall it was a 3 for me because of the trouble I had following along, distinguishing between what was going on, and no real resolution to the plot. Did she make it as a designer for the hotel? Did they get together? Did her cherry get popped? I had so many questions. I think there is a lot of potential with the story but as of the current moment I was left frustrated.

Meet the author:
https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/16474260.Ruby_Redhead

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